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Morning snuggles and mustache tickles!
(Request on Tumblr :heart:)

Cullen Stanton Rutherford x Dorian Pavus.


:bulletgreen: related works:
Our Love is stronger than your hate by DorianPavus Wake up, Amatus by DorianPavus
A voi che amate by DorianPavus Eluvian by DorianPavus  
Sacrifice by DorianPavus Sanctuary by DorianPavus  

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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
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Let me preface this critique with a confession: I don't really know what Dragon Age Inquisition is. Also had to look up what the heck Xnalara is since I've never heard of it. All that aside, I can still give feedback on color, lighting, pose, expression and so on. Here we go.

I assume this piece takes place after "a long night of passionate love activities". If that was the aim, you definitely hit the nail on the head there! Having their bodies glistening with sweat is an excellent indicator of that.

Since this is a 3D posing software, any chance you get to alter the geometry of the models at all? If you can, I feel that blonde guy's expression can be softened. this can be accomplished by closing his mouth into a gentle smile and half closing his eyes to get a sleepy/happy feeling. Perhaps arc his eyebrows upward just slightly.

I do feel that these guys look like dolls because their skin is flawless and has a rubbery-plastic quality.....but that may be because of the model itself. Their hair definitely looks CG but again that may be just the models (interesting since the facial hair has a lot of care to detail but not so for the hair on their heads).

Unsure of how much control you get over lighting in a posing software. Assuming that you do have at least some control, I do have some suggestions:

There should be a shadow from "Blondie's" head casting over "Brownie's" head looking at your light source. There is a little there but I feel there should be more since Brownie's head is nestled into Blondie's neck. Blondie could also use some shading on the left side of his face/neck/shoulder. The pillow underneath both of their heads needs shading since they're lying on top of it. Same for the bed underneath Blondie's neck/shoulder and their torsos. The lack of shading is flattening out the piece and making them seem they lack mass/weight/floating in space.. Some wrinkles and shading would be helpful for the blanket as well as the pillows. Brownie could use stronger shading as well going down his back side facing the most away from the morning light source. Some slight highlights may look nice on Blondie on the areas closest to the light source (right forearm/ shoulder, right hand. some of those same highlights would look nice on Brownie's outstretched right arm/hand.

I hope this is helpful but feel free to ignore all of my suggestions here <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>